Corrections of blogs
Well, I don’t really enjoy this assignment because it’s hard to judge your work and give you some corrections. But we all have to do this, so let’s play the game.
1. Julien’s blog :
Julien didn’t make big mistakes but I think there are some improvements to make :
“The good best host
Finding a good video host is as important as having good keywords. Here, I am looking for a quality record, so bye bye Youtube.
I’ve looked used Vimeo and Dailymotion.
The good words
I first First, I wrote the word “finance”…”
2. Karine’s blog :
Just a little thing to say, it’s about the text before the Koons’ video. I think it misses a word :
“This video is an interview with a contemporary artist : Jeff Koons.”
That’s it for Karine’s blog.
3. Laetitia’s blog :
4. Leslie’s blog :
5. Lionel’s blog :
